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[OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different

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Zigerell sent me some comments on the writing via email, attached.

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Quote:Quotes here but not elsewhere for S factor.

I used the single quotes to talk about the first factor that would otherwise be S if it actually looked like S. They are not only used in the abstract, but also in the text (Sections 8 and 9) and on Figures (e.g. 4).

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Municipal vs. municipality. Wikipedia uses the first. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Administra...s_of_Japan

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Ratio of dwellings with flush toilet

Quote:Percentage instead of ratio?

The descriptions are copied verbatim from the Japanese website. Sometimes their translations are a bit odd. In this case, they talk about ratios, i.e. fractions (values 0-1), but a look at the data reveals them to be percentages (values 0-100). However, since these are equivalent for use in correlational analysis, there is little point to dwell on this minor problem.

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Quote:this decimal place is dislocated from the 82

It is because LibreOffice does not understand that dots can be part of words and so they can be split across linebreaks. There is no automatic solution for this, but I have fixed the identified instances.

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Quote:should there be a comma between "data" and "analysis"?

I meant to write "data or analysis error". Fixed.

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Quote:can be avoided?

Meant to write "could be avoided".

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Other minor errors fixed.

Table borders added.


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Files updated. This is version 9 of the paper.

https://osf.io/4bw8u/files/

I have also written an explanation of the files for the project on OSF: https://osf.io/4bw8u/wiki/home/

This is to make it easier for re-use by other people including myself later!.


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[OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Emil - 2015-Dec-17, 20:39:57
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by ljzigerell - 2015-Dec-18, 06:40:56
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Emil - 2015-Dec-18, 07:43:46
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by ljzigerell - 2015-Dec-18, 18:38:52
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Emil - 2015-Dec-23, 06:06:58
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by ljzigerell - 2015-Dec-23, 09:31:09
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Kenya Kura - 2015-Dec-23, 19:09:56
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Kenya Kura - 2015-Dec-21, 17:43:59
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Emil - 2015-Dec-23, 11:17:58
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Emil - 2015-Dec-23, 15:57:40
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Emil - 2015-Dec-23, 23:05:40
Proofreading - by Emil - 2015-Dec-27, 22:08:17
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by bpesta22 - 2016-Jan-25, 18:27:51
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Emil - 2016-Jan-25, 22:23:50
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by bpesta22 - 2016-Jan-29, 19:56:06
Reply to Pesta - by Emil - 2016-Jan-30, 11:50:54
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by NoahCarl - 2016-Apr-04, 16:44:02
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Emil - 2016-Apr-05, 23:29:41
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by NoahCarl - 2016-Apr-06, 12:00:22
RE: [OQSPS] Inequality across prefectures in Japan is different - by Emil - 2016-Apr-06, 19:18:35
 
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