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[ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab

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Emil,

I have only a few minor criticisms and observations:

1. You should add a paragraph that would summarize the excellent points you made about immigrant overrepresentation in special education classes and communal youth schools. Truancy is another factor that might make IQ differences seem smaller than they really are.

2. "I chose Islam prevalence because of frequent media attention being given to this factor." Could you elaborate a bit? Do the media frequently discuss poor academic performance among the children of Muslim immigrants? Since you seem to attach a lot of importance to this variable, it wouldn't hurt to summarize what is said in the media and include a few quotes.

2. In your paper, the word "data" is treated sometimes as a plural noun and sometimes as a singular noun. Most style books recommend treating it as a plural noun (the singular form would be "datum"). So you should write "The data for the year 2013/2014 are here" and "GPA data are also available ...".

I like this paper and am more than willing to give my approval if you address the above points.
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[ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Nov-02, 00:49:54
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-02, 03:13:04
Normality - by Emil - 2014-Nov-02, 05:37:41
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-02, 19:21:44
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Nov-02, 19:32:02
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-02, 20:15:44
Shapiro test - by Emil - 2014-Nov-02, 22:39:48
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-03, 19:29:29
Spearman - by Emil - 2014-Nov-03, 04:17:20
Nonnormal - by Emil - 2014-Nov-03, 22:59:31
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-06, 01:32:32
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Nov-06, 01:48:01
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Nov-06, 02:46:26
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-06, 02:59:02
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Nov-06, 03:57:07
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-06, 20:48:41
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Nov-07, 02:31:06
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-07, 20:24:16
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Nov-09, 04:19:00
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Nov-26, 19:38:54
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2014-Dec-30, 00:35:58
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2015-Jan-12, 22:12:58
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Jan-14, 14:28:28
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2015-Jan-25, 01:51:01
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Nov-27, 23:31:16
I have updated the paper to draft #4 - by Emil - 2014-Nov-29, 08:20:32
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2014-Dec-05, 01:19:52
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Dec-05, 10:54:41
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2014-Dec-27, 05:57:01
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-05, 19:33:18
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Peter Frost - 2014-Dec-30, 23:31:30
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Jan-14, 15:00:45
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Jan-13, 00:13:23
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Jan-25, 02:43:12
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Feb-02, 16:58:19
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-02, 19:21:15
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Feb-02, 20:34:14
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-02, 21:12:06
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Feb-03, 03:48:24
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Feb-05, 17:14:10
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-08, 03:52:29
Reply to John's #41 - by Emil - 2015-Feb-09, 04:15:15
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-11, 04:26:03
Draft #6 - by Emil - 2015-Feb-17, 05:04:22
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2015-Mar-12, 22:05:36
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Mar-13, 00:50:20
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Peter Frost - 2015-May-24, 18:13:12
Reply to Peter #47 - by Emil - 2015-May-26, 07:56:34
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Peter Frost - 2015-May-26, 18:42:03
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-May-26, 23:00:21
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school - by Meng Hu - 2015-May-28, 08:32:30
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2015-May-28, 23:16:31
Reply to MH #51 - by Emil - 2015-May-28, 10:09:59
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school - by Meng Hu - 2015-May-28, 17:34:38
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-May-28, 23:25:35
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Chuck - 2015-May-30, 19:52:15
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Jun-04, 14:36:24
RE: [ODP] Immigrant GPA in Danish primary school is predictable from country-level variab - by Emil - 2015-Jun-04, 18:15:24
 
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