(2014-Oct-30, 19:52:27)Dalliard Wrote: 1) "finding the correlation between subtests' g-loading and each person's scores on the subtests" --> g-loadingS

Fixed.

Quote:2) Rephrase: "I ran the partial correlations with GPA and g partialled out."

Rephrased to "I ran the partial correlations between each subtest and GPA with g partialled out."

Quote:4) I think there should be more reflection on the intra- versus inter-individual differences problem, but I approve publication in any case.

I don't understand what the problem is exactly, so I can't comment.

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Added new revision, #8, dated 30th Oct.

https://osf.io/gb3cy/
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There are 4 reviewer approvals:

Meng Hu -

http://www.openpsych.net/forum/showthrea...99#pid1799
Piffer -

http://www.openpsych.net/forum/showthrea...05#pid1805
Fuerst -

http://www.openpsych.net/forum/showthrea...58#pid2058
Dalliard -

http://www.openpsych.net/forum/showthrea...07#pid2107
I will do last edit for minor language corrections and publish.