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(2014-Dec-06, 23:50:14)Emil Wrote: Dear Piffer,

Quote: 2.3. “This has repeatedly been found for so many years that it hardly bears repeating”. Too informal?

No rules against that.


Just a suggestion, some readers (especially hard nosed academics) may find it too informal. Personally I don't care.

Quote:How would you like us to make it more clear? In the figure title? I have added "Simulation results based on census data" to the figure title.

I don't see how anyone could be confused, since the paper is about modeling and there is no mention of any actual data aside from the one army study.

Draft updated to version 9.

Modeling has two phases, developing (theory) and testing (empirical), so it can also entail testing the model against real data (empirical part), unless you're writing a purely theoretical paper, which does not seem to be the case. Be that as it may, I think it's fine now since you added ""Simulation results based on census data" to the figure title." and this makes it clearer to the reader.
I approve the paper as it is, my review is done.
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[ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2014-Nov-02, 20:01:01
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2014-Nov-02, 22:43:18
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Philbrick Bastinado - 2014-Nov-03, 09:40:17
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2014-Nov-03, 11:26:32
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-03, 18:59:51
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general - by Dalliard - 2014-Nov-06, 00:40:44
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2014-Nov-14, 09:50:51
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2014-Nov-14, 18:33:35
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2014-Nov-14, 19:15:46
Modeling - by Emil - 2014-Nov-14, 19:41:19
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2014-Nov-14, 20:08:50
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2014-Nov-21, 16:38:16
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-27, 00:48:02
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2014-Nov-27, 01:03:36
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-27, 01:25:15
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2014-Nov-27, 05:32:17
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Meng Hu - 2014-Nov-27, 22:38:52
Reply to MH #18 - by Emil - 2014-Nov-30, 09:10:53
New draft - by Emil - 2014-Nov-27, 06:42:48
Tambs et al 1989 - by Emil - 2014-Nov-30, 08:51:57
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2014-Dec-03, 17:21:39
Reply to Piffer #21 - by Emil - 2014-Dec-06, 23:50:14
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intellig - by Duxide - 2014-Dec-07, 00:26:56
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status - by Meng Hu - 2014-Dec-12, 21:42:57
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2014-Dec-12, 22:35:54
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Meng Hu - 2014-Dec-13, 01:59:15
Trouble R us! - by Emil - 2014-Dec-13, 04:15:50
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Meng Hu - 2014-Dec-13, 19:41:49
Reply to MH #28 - by Emil - 2014-Dec-27, 06:03:34
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-05, 19:31:10
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Jan-14, 15:12:23
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-15, 04:01:23
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Jan-15, 04:06:08
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-21, 03:16:28
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Dalliard - 2015-Jan-16, 19:35:45
Reply to Dalliard #34 - by Emil - 2015-Jan-19, 06:34:28
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Jan-21, 12:29:59
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-23, 02:59:29
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Jan-23, 15:18:43
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-25, 05:33:11
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Jan-24, 07:37:51
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in Denmark - by Kenya Kura - 2015-Jan-24, 09:13:28
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-29, 03:05:22
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Jan-30, 05:32:34
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Jan-25, 07:02:44
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-26, 04:54:21
Time series and Granger - by Emil - 2015-Jan-30, 05:45:25
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Jan-31, 04:11:02
Reply to Chuck #50 - by Emil - 2015-Feb-02, 17:01:01
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-04, 23:00:22
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-05, 00:27:34
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-31, 00:24:02
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Jan-31, 04:24:04
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Meng Hu - 2015-Jan-31, 04:59:48
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Jan-31, 05:52:47
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Feb-02, 18:18:49
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Jan-31, 02:05:53
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Jan-31, 06:08:26
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Jan-31, 21:09:48
A new draft, #12 - by Emil - 2015-Feb-02, 18:37:25
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Feb-04, 21:07:09
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-04, 23:30:11
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-04, 23:09:02
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-05, 00:07:16
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Feb-05, 02:14:35
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-05, 03:52:13
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Feb-06, 04:38:59
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-06, 05:37:00
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Feb-06, 19:32:06
The inequality section - by Emil - 2015-Feb-05, 19:28:41
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-06, 03:15:39
Reply to Chuck #68 - by Emil - 2015-Feb-06, 04:26:13
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-06, 04:36:24
Measured IQs and the alphabet - by Emil - 2015-Feb-06, 06:04:54
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-06, 17:30:32
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-06, 17:45:29
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-07, 19:52:33
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-07, 20:32:42
Check #78 - by Emil - 2015-Feb-07, 21:03:37
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-07, 21:28:55
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-07, 21:37:31
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-07, 23:41:43
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Feb-08, 19:19:10
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-12, 18:19:44
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2015-Feb-12, 22:01:42
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-12, 22:31:39
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2015-Feb-12, 22:41:59
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-16, 02:38:05
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2015-Feb-16, 14:14:10
Section header fixed - by Emil - 2015-Feb-16, 16:30:56
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2015-Feb-16, 16:34:48
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Feb-13, 22:09:12
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Chuck - 2015-Feb-13, 22:28:46
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-13, 02:38:19
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2015-Feb-13, 12:46:44
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-13, 16:17:34
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Duxide - 2015-Feb-13, 17:15:18
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Feb-15, 02:52:07
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Dalliard - 2015-Feb-16, 14:20:18
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-16, 16:37:07
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in Denmark - by Kenya Kura - 2015-Feb-19, 16:20:36
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence - by Meng Hu - 2015-Feb-20, 16:48:58
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Feb-20, 06:17:50
RE: [ODP] Increasing inequality in general intelligence and socioeconomic status as a res - by Emil - 2015-Mar-04, 02:30:21
 
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